furryhunter
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- Jan 13, 2019
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ok pls tell me why i have made a applicatoin tht has nothing wrong with it and they deny it here take a look
what is wrong with my English?You need to expand on question 2, make it longer. Talk about Giro's back-story: where he grew up; his family situation; living arrangements; how he got to Red County, if not from there. Go into his ambitions, what you plan on doing with him, what job he wants or what group he wants to be part of. You need to write an actual paragraph as opposed to just a line.
From your post here, I'd say you need to work on your English too.
I TRIED 4 TIMESJust put more effort in your application.
Work on your spelling and ensure you use capital letters in the correct places. Don't rush it, actually think about it.what is wrong with my English?
Thank you very much is it ok if you can make it to where i can make applications again you made me realize what i did wrong and i thank you for thatLike previously mentioned by the people above, improve on your story and write more of it. A single line isn't a paragraph. Write the paragraph about your character, not you.