Needs more effort. The Russians are using the First Skin for sure. What you need to do, and what alot of other people need to do, is get everything read.. Type a story, get all your ID's, Pictures, and so on, then post the App up. Most of the Apps around now have little to no effort in them at all.
Just take peoples advise and before you post something, make sure you have it all so you don't leave parts behind to do later.
This reminds me of Filips mafia using asian skins
Edit : Also, don't put Gang in the end. What the fuck is this? Gang or Mafia? You should only put The Corleone Family, or be original and instead of Corleone it could be Stracci, Tattaglia or Cuneo.
Edit 2 : Not very original BUT everyone when they think about The Godfather they think about the Corleones and not the other families.