Can someone look at my app and tell me what's wrong with the spelling/grammar?

[UseroneGaming]

So today I made an app to join SASP and it got denied for poor grammar, with the recruiting officer also clearly stating that I am unable to write in English.

I've never had this problem before, could someone please point out some grammatical mistakes that I may be missing that would disqualify me from joining the SASP?

https://sasp.redcountyrp.com/viewtopic.php?f=469&t=6461

 

[paxie]

• I am hoping that the SASP department
  
• I am perfectly capable of applying the use of force matrix - I will never use more or less force than necessary.
  
• I found my work very enjoyable when I was apart of the department

Only mistakes I could find, but you shouldn't get denied for that, the rest of your english seems fine. I'll get it checked out.

Also, wrong section. This section is for Technical Support/Questions, not questions regarding the server.

 

[Rich]

I recommend you proofread your stuff in the future, albeit your English is not as bad as the officer makes it seem dude. You got the short end of the stick.

 

[Yassin]

Moved from Technical Support/Questions to Help Section.

 

[paxie]

L&A, question answered and your app was re-looked at by SASP and accepted.