If you want the honest answer you don't need to put one hour into a white list application, if it was denied the ruling authority had good reason. There must've been fallacies in it such as plagiarism, bad grammar, etc. Next time just spend 15-30 minutes on a story make sure grammar is there and have a nice concept, it isn't that serious chief. Just remember that the people accepting and denying whitelist applications have a job to do and that's to uphold the "Heavy Rp" standards the server tries to emulate.